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03 August 2007 @ 06:11 pm
writing exercise number zero.  
thank you for knowing where i'm supposed to land.
jon/demetri/jason, 200 words, pg, somewhat of an au written hastily for effetely. title taken with love from the blindside song "nothing but skin".
Disclaimer: Any similarity between the fictional version of the person portrayed here and the actual persons is purely coincidental. This is a work of fiction. This is not an attempt to defame the character of said person on the basis of libel, as the work is FICTIONAL (and NOT an intently false statement created with the express purpose of misleading others about the actual character of said person).

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It ended before it started, really.

It's like they're all having simultaneous breakdowns, mid-life crisis's in unison, and only Demetri takes offense to that as he rolls his eyes and says "I'm not that old, you pricks," before running his fingers down Jon's thighs as Jason laughs shakily.

The thing is - really - that this is something you see in movies and fiction, far out comedies and overacted dramas that you see on late night tv as you're trying and failing to fall asleep. Jon empathizes with this metaphor the most, quite literally staring at the ceiling with red eyes, catching cracks in the plaster and listening to the steady rise and fall of Jason's breathing.

Jason dryly jokes that they're all too mature to be settling back into the teenage girls’ mentality of infidelity, but in reality, this isn't funny at all. And even though they all make a living out of making a people laugh, it's really the last thing that they should be doing.

"That's the life of a funny adulterer," Jon says, rounding out the conversation. "One step forward, two steps back."

end.

 
 
Current Mood: pessimisticpessimistic
Current Music: nothing but skin - blindside.
 
 
 
metowardmyselfmetowardmyself on August 3rd, 2007 10:31 pm (UTC)
GOOD. :)
let's write stories together.: *iz a dork*argyletheme on August 3rd, 2007 10:34 pm (UTC)
THX. :D!
AMS: mg - lost at seacosmicdancer on August 4th, 2007 02:25 am (UTC)
Oh wow, I really like this. It's broken and sad and lovely.
let's write stories together.: :3argyletheme on August 4th, 2007 03:39 pm (UTC)
thank you! <3 :)
cobrasnaps: lewis - i'm so happy -glare-cobrasnaps on August 4th, 2007 12:11 pm (UTC)
Why do you write so pretty, Kaden. Why.

200 words, but 200 well worth it. My God. You made my morning.

There's such depth to this. Simple sentences and words that pack a punch because they are arranged. I love most importantly that this came out of nowhere, just probably like, right out of your ass LOL. And that's just awesome.

There's only certain authors that I slow down my reading for. I read fast you see (two pages a minute), so when I want to pay attention, I'll read slow, and when I do, you are among the few that don't disappoint.

... fuck lol. This inspires me to finish up that damn fic (Jon/Denis, Unforgiven fic) which will probably be my last in TDS fandom. But you know, you're awesome. Because you give me the incentive to keep writing with these characters, despite having barely any further connection to them.

I hope you and Rae are having mundo fun! =D
cobrasnaps: metallica - METLLICAcobrasnaps on August 4th, 2007 12:12 pm (UTC)
BTW, I'm affiliating colbernellodeux with fictionallica. Deal. =P